Attached is a draft MS of High-Rise Crew: Financial Insiders. Some of you have been asked to read the whole MS. Others, just sections. I’m after errors, omissions, missed opportunities, anything that jumps out as being off.

Poker: Chapters 4 through 17 involve a con with a high-stakes poker game at it’s core. Read all 13 chapters, or focus on Chapter 8 – pages 30 – 39, and Chapter 13 – beginning on page 48 – ending on 51. The game ends with pages 61 – 64 of Chapter 17. The most critical sections on poker are highlighted in red.

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